Thursday, November 11, 2010

Blog #5

Well to start I did it completely wrong, I did not do it in the format that I was supposed to. When I went to OWL I thought that the way that I typed was the way that Kristen wanted it to be but I was wrong. So one of the things that I would change when I rewrite would be to change the format to the correct form. Another, would be to actually analyze it instead, what I did was summarize it and that was not what the assignment was looking for. With that said I could say that I did not effectively discuss whether or not the argument was successful. My opinion was on the paper I wrote a lot about what my opinion was on most of all my paragraphs, but like I stated before, it was not exactly what the assignment was. When I was doing my evaluative summary I wrote my opinions and I believe I did have good transitions from the concrete details to the sentences where my opinion was. I think my choice of words used for the evaluative summary were appropriate so I do not think that I could have used stronger verbs or different ones to help my writing. Overall, I have to rewrite my paper in the correct format, analyze it not summarize it, and now I will have to go back and reread the article and try to analyze it more carefully and rewrite it to get that grade that I want. J

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